This style guide needs a style guide. It should be, "But you're not writing a novel OR a magazine story..." Not "nor". It could have been, "But you're writing NEITHER a novel NOR a magazine story.." or, "But you're NOT writing a novel, NOR are you writing a magazine story...". Both are rather clunky, though. The rogue "nor" is a classic sign of someone trying too hard. Sorry to be a pedant, but as a writer I just can't help it. And this is, after all, supposed to be a guide to good English.
This style guide needs a style guide. It should be, "But you're not writing a novel OR a magazine story..." Not "nor". It could have been, "But you're writing NEITHER a novel NOR a magazine story.." or, "But you're NOT writing a novel, NOR are you writing a magazine story...". Both are rather clunky, though. The rogue "nor" is a classic sign of someone trying too hard. Sorry to be a pedant, but as a writer I just can't help it. And this is, after all, supposed to be a guide to good English.
Everybody thinks faster than they can type (well, most of us do, anyway) so consequently, words do get dropped from time to time, or misspelled as another word that spell-check doesn't catch. I try to remember to always read my completed blog entries top to bottom before posting. Typos always look worse when you're a writer by trade. More blather at http://craigmcnamara.blogspot.com/
That's a good guide. Did you get a Kit Kat from the mini bar yet?
Posted by: Ben | February 07, 2008 at 07:48 PM
I'm in Switzerland. There's only Toblerone.
Posted by: russell | February 07, 2008 at 07:57 PM
You should be writing a blogging guide. You do it exceptionally well.
Posted by: Pablo Rosas | February 07, 2008 at 11:14 PM
Does that mean the mini bars are bigger?
Posted by: John Dodds | February 08, 2008 at 02:19 AM
No matter about spelling and syntax: five hyphenated words in a seven-line paragraph - that really is shocking.
Posted by: davidthedesigner | February 08, 2008 at 08:23 AM
The Toblerones are mini John.
Posted by: The Kaiser | February 08, 2008 at 09:41 AM
This style guide needs a style guide. It should be, "But you're not writing a novel OR a magazine story..." Not "nor". It could have been, "But you're writing NEITHER a novel NOR a magazine story.." or, "But you're NOT writing a novel, NOR are you writing a magazine story...". Both are rather clunky, though. The rogue "nor" is a classic sign of someone trying too hard. Sorry to be a pedant, but as a writer I just can't help it. And this is, after all, supposed to be a guide to good English.
Posted by: Mike Reed | February 08, 2008 at 10:41 AM
This style guide needs a style guide. It should be, "But you're not writing a novel OR a magazine story..." Not "nor". It could have been, "But you're writing NEITHER a novel NOR a magazine story.." or, "But you're NOT writing a novel, NOR are you writing a magazine story...". Both are rather clunky, though. The rogue "nor" is a classic sign of someone trying too hard. Sorry to be a pedant, but as a writer I just can't help it. And this is, after all, supposed to be a guide to good English.
Posted by: Mike Reed | February 08, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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perhaps they got their hyphens cheap.
Posted by: funkypancake | February 08, 2008 at 06:45 PM
Everybody thinks faster than they can type (well, most of us do, anyway) so consequently, words do get dropped from time to time, or misspelled as another word that spell-check doesn't catch. I try to remember to always read my completed blog entries top to bottom before posting. Typos always look worse when you're a writer by trade. More blather at http://craigmcnamara.blogspot.com/
Posted by: Craig McNamara | February 08, 2008 at 11:54 PM