Simon and I have just been through all 50 entries for Assignment 10 for the last time. And since there were so many entries I don't think we can mark each one individually. Sorry about that. Instead we've recorded about 30 minutes of audio talking about the best ones, what might be good stuff to do and what to learn from this exercise. Hopefully.
Here are the 10 propositions from the winning paper from Ben M.
1. Apples help digest everything else.
2. Eat apples. Save the trees. Reduce global warming.
3. Sweet snack, good for teeth, recycled packaging
4. Apples. Earth’s vitamin tablet.
5. Apples. The dawn of Atheism.
6. Apples. Detox since before tox.
7. Apples. Smoothies without plastic.
8. (RED) Apples
9. Apples. Faster food.
10. English apples. Fruit without emissions.
They're not all brilliant, but quite a lot of them are. More than I could have done. As we discuss in the audio a proposition is a limited tool, increasingly unsuited for building communications today but it's a really good thing to get good at. It's like a musician practicing scales. Thinking propositions teaches you to think about precis, memorable language, tangental thoughts, differentiation, all sorts of things.
Even people who don't like propositions find themselves using this kind of thing as a kind of internal headline. A way of summing up an idea.
Quite a lot of you didn't really do propositions. Many of you gave us ideas for the marketing of apples, which is fine and dandy and many of them were great ideas, but that's not really what we were looking for, this is not what this exercise was about. This was about creating pithy little communications thoughts such as those above. Similarly many of you gave us 'territories'; areas where we might find a proposition (healthiness, range, englishness, temptation, etc) but didn't distill it into a coherent thought.
This might be because lots of you didn't read the task properly, including the addenda (is that a word?) to the task we added in the comments. First rule - read the whole assignment. However, it may be that we weren't clear so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and apologise for that.
Anyway - we'll bumblingly try and explain what we mean in the audio.
BUT, although Mr Grant will think me a hopeless ludite, I think this proposition thing is well worth practising so I'm going to suggest we do it again as a quick end of November task.
The subject is Maple Syrup. Just 5 propositions. Each one just a sentence of 10 words or less.
Try and do some as good as numbers 4, 6 and 7 above. Get them in before December 8th.
Hope this makes sense, and congratulations to Ben who wins this month's challenge. Though I've not worked out what his prize is yet.